Oh Dicta, I love what you did here! Harry's lonesomeness and his hunger, you wrote it so beautifully, and then, when he satisfies this hunger by sucking and chewing Malfoy (to me he is Malfox here because of his calculating nature) is just so sensual and perfect. And the implication in the end, that Harry waits in vain, that he has been used when he was most defenceless and trusting - wonderful in a very sad way! Draco, so cunning and manipulative here, self-confident and Slytherin to the heart, is my favourit, can't hate him for what he's doing. Thank you, I really adore your strong writing and your ability to wake all my feelings. ♥
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Date: 2015-06-06 06:18 am (UTC)Oh Dicta, I love what you did here! Harry's lonesomeness and his hunger, you wrote it so beautifully, and then, when he satisfies this hunger by sucking and chewing Malfoy (to me he is Malfox here because of his calculating nature) is just so sensual and perfect. And the implication in the end, that Harry waits in vain, that he has been used when he was most defenceless and trusting - wonderful in a very sad way! Draco, so cunning and manipulative here, self-confident and Slytherin to the heart, is my favourit, can't hate him for what he's doing. Thank you, I really adore your strong writing and your ability to wake all my feelings. ♥