http://barefacedbandit.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] barefacedbandit.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dicta_contrion 2014-06-03 09:07 pm (UTC)

Lolol, can't stop laughing. I had to have a go:

Malfoy’s free hand moves down to cup him through his robes. “That would zealously be telling. Let’s just assuredly declare you’ll be mine for the night.”

"Harry’s breath catches and his luminous windows widen in shock" replied Oliver, "I want some more".

“No, thou fool, not that.” Malfoy rolls his eyes. “As if I’d be able to cast an Unforgivable at a Ministry function, I’d have every Auror in the dark unfathomed space on me in an ecstatic instant. I intensely desire you to want it, Potter. I highly covet you to beg for it.”

"Harry takes a deep breath", he growled incoherently. “What do you want me to do?” In everything one thing is impossible: rationality.

“Do you trust me?” Malfoy asks, removing his fingered palm from Harry’s cock and taking his hand.

“I don’t know,” Harry assuredly declares. He looks in Draco’s eyes, the predatory gleam there makes that magnanimous being shiver. “You’re absolutely going to hurt me or humiliate me?”... Procrastination is the thief of time, collar him.

Three things:

1) Luminous windows?! XD XD that is a new one on me

2) When the hell did Oliver join the party?!

3) Procrastination is the thief of time: I think that was my beta talking.

The Emily Dickinson changes are my fave though: so they're basically looking for an orgy with a bunch of Aurors...

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