Omg. Oh my god. This is amazing and incredible, and I am a blithering mess in the wake of it, and wondering if I need to go and do some star jumps, or kick over boxes, or possibly just stand outside and bite my fist and scream LOL, this is SO GOOD and ARGH it's them, it's Moneymaker Harry and Draco, and, and *whimpers* it's so perfect! *sobs*
This is so well written (the UST, oh good lord, the UST!!) and picks up exactly where they left off with Moneymaker, and the tension is just off the charts.
His pace picked up as he got closer and he had to remind himself to slow down. Wouldn't do to look like he was in a rush. He was almost sauntering by the time he stepped into the doorway and squared his shoulders.
*loud swallow*
I love that Harry is fixated on that last line, wondering what Malfoy meant, when really we know that's a cover for so much more, as is his reason to need to clarify what Malfoy meant. Oh god and the ENDING (I am possibly not capable of talking about this is a linear fashion lol, sorry in advance) but that ending so so perfect, and I need to compose sonnets to how wonderful Harry is here. He just is Harry, the way he pushes back, rises to Malfoy's bait and can't help himself but react, even when he's trying to control it.
"You're an arse," Harry snapped, before he could think better of it.
"Depends on who you ask," Malfoy replied smoothly. "Though, speaking of arses, if we're to include those you might begin to have something to work with."
Harry felt himself freeze and had to work at moving his jaw. When he spoke, it was through clenched teeth. "Is that why you took this meeting?"
"Isn't that why you called it?"
KJAHJKDGHJgSHJFGA?!?!?! God, Malfoy is so perfect, he is exactly as composed and cutting and infuriatingly sexy as he was in the original, and I love him SO much, the way he just gets under Harry's skin, and you can almost feel his glee about it. This feels like so perfectly how they would interact, as adults who can't help but stoop to pigtail-pulling levels as they try to one-up each other until one, or both, of them buckles. Malfoy is so brazen, and direct, and Harry is so affected by ittttttt, and I love it so much *tiny whimper* so much!
Guh, and when Harry gets the upper hand, it's so perfect, I was a sobbing mess (I still ammmm):
Malfoy's ears pinked and Harry could barely stop himself laughing in relief. He wasn't the only one with predictable tells
*squeak of joy* oh god, Malfoy on the backfoot! And then:
Harry willed himself to lean back and drop his hands casually to the armrests. "Did you like fucking my arse, Malfoy?"
OH MY FUCKING GOD, HARRY! *claps hand over mouth, shocked whimper* argh, I love this, the way Harry takes the lead and surprises Malfoy, it's so wonderful -- they're so evenly matched, and it's so satisfying. God and the sex, arghhhhhhh *more joyful sobbing* it's amazing, the power dynamics between them are so expertly fleshed out, and the switching! God, Malfoy, argh, he's, so poised and controlled, and then when he loses it and begs?!?!?!?!?!?! My god. I can absolutely see what might be going in his head now, how he would be reacting to possibly exposing himself or making himself (what he might perceive as being) vulnerable in front of Harry, and it was handled so expertly and *exactly* how I would picture Malfoy being. Once again, I'm left wondering how sincere Malfoy's "been there, done that" was, how rattled and exhilarated letting harry tie him up must have made him (WITH HIS OWN TIE ARGHHHDJNHBmGDJD *weeps*).
Guh, I could go on about this for pages and pages, it's brilliant and hot and both of them are such wonderful, complicated men, and there's SO MUCH of the boys there were in them still (flinging insults at each other like 11 year olds. omg!). it's amazing, and I love it, and you are a MASTER of these two!! The dynamic between them is incendiary, and I love that it's not all roses and teacakes at the end, and they're still both left wanting but refusing (or, just unable) to admit. Aaaaah, so good!
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*the world's loudest exhale*
Omg. Oh my god. This is amazing and incredible, and I am a blithering mess in the wake of it, and wondering if I need to go and do some star jumps, or kick over boxes, or possibly just stand outside and bite my fist and scream LOL, this is SO GOOD and ARGH it's them, it's Moneymaker Harry and Draco, and, and *whimpers* it's so perfect! *sobs*
This is so well written (the UST, oh good lord, the UST!!) and picks up exactly where they left off with Moneymaker, and the tension is just off the charts.
His pace picked up as he got closer and he had to remind himself to slow down. Wouldn't do to look like he was in a rush. He was almost sauntering by the time he stepped into the doorway and squared his shoulders.
*loud swallow*
I love that Harry is fixated on that last line, wondering what Malfoy meant, when really we know that's a cover for so much more, as is his reason to need to clarify what Malfoy meant. Oh god and the ENDING (I am possibly not capable of talking about this is a linear fashion lol, sorry in advance) but that ending so so perfect, and I need to compose sonnets to how wonderful Harry is here. He just is Harry, the way he pushes back, rises to Malfoy's bait and can't help himself but react, even when he's trying to control it.
"You're an arse," Harry snapped, before he could think better of it.
"Depends on who you ask," Malfoy replied smoothly. "Though, speaking of arses, if we're to include those you might begin to have something to work with."
Harry felt himself freeze and had to work at moving his jaw. When he spoke, it was through clenched teeth. "Is that why you took this meeting?"
"Isn't that why you called it?"
KJAHJKDGHJgSHJFGA?!?!?! God, Malfoy is so perfect, he is exactly as composed and cutting and infuriatingly sexy as he was in the original, and I love him SO much, the way he just gets under Harry's skin, and you can almost feel his glee about it. This feels like so perfectly how they would interact, as adults who can't help but stoop to pigtail-pulling levels as they try to one-up each other until one, or both, of them buckles. Malfoy is so brazen, and direct, and Harry is so affected by ittttttt, and I love it so much *tiny whimper* so much!
Guh, and when Harry gets the upper hand, it's so perfect, I was a sobbing mess (I still ammmm):
Malfoy's ears pinked and Harry could barely stop himself laughing in relief. He wasn't the only one with predictable tells
*squeak of joy* oh god, Malfoy on the backfoot! And then:
Harry willed himself to lean back and drop his hands casually to the armrests. "Did you like fucking my arse, Malfoy?"
OH MY FUCKING GOD, HARRY! *claps hand over mouth, shocked whimper* argh, I love this, the way Harry takes the lead and surprises Malfoy, it's so wonderful -- they're so evenly matched, and it's so satisfying. God and the sex, arghhhhhhh *more joyful sobbing* it's amazing, the power dynamics between them are so expertly fleshed out, and the switching! God, Malfoy, argh, he's, so poised and controlled, and then when he loses it and begs?!?!?!?!?!?! My god. I can absolutely see what might be going in his head now, how he would be reacting to possibly exposing himself or making himself (what he might perceive as being) vulnerable in front of Harry, and it was handled so expertly and *exactly* how I would picture Malfoy being. Once again, I'm left wondering how sincere Malfoy's "been there, done that" was, how rattled and exhilarated letting harry tie him up must have made him (WITH HIS OWN TIE ARGHHHDJNHBmGDJD *weeps*).
Guh, I could go on about this for pages and pages, it's brilliant and hot and both of them are such wonderful, complicated men, and there's SO MUCH of the boys there were in them still (flinging insults at each other like 11 year olds. omg!). it's amazing, and I love it, and you are a MASTER of these two!! The dynamic between them is incendiary, and I love that it's not all roses and teacakes at the end, and they're still both left wanting but refusing (or, just unable) to admit. Aaaaah, so good!